Aaytowi2:  

Difficulty: +2
Originality: +1
Execution : -2
Presentation: 0

Some interesting ideas here, too bad for poor execution. A better angle would probably also benefit you.

Total =  +1

Double J:

Difficulty: 0
Originality: -1
Execution : -1
Presentation: 0

Nothing new or different about your combo. Simple tricks, simple linkages. Work on getting a better structure with a wider trick family and you’ll go far.

Total = -2

Mushwoom:

Difficulty: +2
Originality: +2
Execution : +2
Presentation: +1

Good combo rhytm with lots of great material. Finisher fits combo very nicely.

Total = +7

Tchus:

Difficulty: +3
Originality: +3
Execution: +2
Presentation: -1

Complex and original.But angle kills your proposal and has a big chance of offcam. Id fix this if I were you, I like your WT R3 angle best.

Total = +7

Gravity:

Difficulty: +2
Originality: +1
Execution : +1
Presentation: 0

I like your ideas, but every combo of yours feels the same to me. Id stop using levers as much as you do.

Total = +4

Apsa:

Difficulty: +2
Originality: +2
Execution : -2
Presentation: 0

I see some good ideas here, but the overwhelming amount of filler and exec errors makes this combo less enjoyable to watch.

Total = +2

Neir’da:

Difficulty: +3
Originality: +1
Execution : +3
Presentation: +2

I like this combo overall, difficulty is high with good exec. However, I feel this could’ve been structured better; the pinky baks kinda took me off it. This particular sequence before the counter could’ve been shorter.

Total = +9

Frost:

Difficulty: -2
Originality: -2
Execution : 0
Presentation: 0

This FS is too simple for a tournament of this magnitud.

Total = -4

Megas/Mejace:

Difficulty: +2
Originality: +2
Execution : +3
Presentation: +2

I love the theme throughout this combo, specially because its way harder than it looks.

Total = +9

Leftfinger:

Difficulty: +3
Originality: +2
Execution : +2
Presentation: -2

Great display of abilities. Too bad about the angle though.

Total = +5

Tidus:

Difficulty: +1
Originality: +1
Execution : +1
Presentation: +1

I dont think this angle suits you. It makes a lot of the tricks you do hard to watch/seem incorrectly executed.

Total = +4

Aston:

Difficulty: +2
Originality: +1
Execution : +2
Presentation: +1

This was the one that most surprised me. Simple yet effective, with a lot of subtlety that can only be seen in the slomo.

Total = +6


Dustfall:

Difficulty: +2
Originality: +2
Execution : +1
Presentation: 0

I like the way you implemented meta tricks from modern ps in your combo. Combo doesnt feel saturated with them as some other ones usually would.

Total = +5

Mango

Difficulty: +2
Originality:+2
Execution :0
Presentation: +1

I can see where you were going with this. Stutters and poor spins kinda made this into agood combo with exec flaws. Nothing that you cant fix in R2.

Oh, and go back to UPSB you jerk.

Total = +5

Pink:

Difficulty: -1
Originality: +1
Execution : +1
Presentation:-1

I mean… Was the finisher even planned?

Total = 0

Apefat:

Difficulty: -2
Originality: -3
Execution : 0
Presentation: -1

This FS is also not suitable for a tournament of this magnitud. Plus camera facing back of your hand is not helpful

Total = -6

ArkOnix:

Difficulty: +2
Originality: +2
Execution : +2
Presentation: +2

Good combo with neat display of style. Try focusing on creating complex linkages and tone down on powertricks a bit maybe? Just a suggestion.

Total = +8

thebeygeek:

Difficulty: +2
Originality: +1
Execution : +3
Presentation: +1

This is what a R1 combo should feel like. I have no technical point to make here, other than maybe place the camera further from you. WT17 R3 angle would probably be a better one.

Oh wait, I do. Finisher is waaaaay too long. could’ve ended after a couple busts.

Total = +7

Initial:

Difficulty: 0
Originality: 0
Execution : +1
Presentation: 0

I dont know what to say other than this will probably be the next parameter combo for FPSBT lol.

I see you had nice ideas at some point. Better angle facing from top – down and centered on your hand will help increase your points.

Total = +1

Gisele8:

Difficulty: +2
Originality: +2
Execution : +2
Presentation: 0

Glad you’re back Gisele. Your combo seems really nice, but a little bit spammy in places and angle is grabage. I prefer the ones from WC12. If you have to keep this one, please spin closer to the center in order to avoid offcams.

Total = +6

Ivabra:

Difficulty: +2
Originality: +1
Execution : +1
Presentation: +2

Should’ve ended at around 0:18. Even fillery ivabra is still goddamn strong. Id also try fixing the ghost effect on your camera.

Total = +6

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Aaytowi2 : 18,5
Double J (ou Dark je sais plus trop) : -7,5
Mushwoom : 19,5
Tchus : 32
Gravity : 24
Apsa : 2,5
Neir'da : 35
Frost : -0,5
Mejace : 40
Leftfinger : 18,5
Tidus : 16,5
Aston : 13,5
Dustfall : 25,5
Mango : 24,5
Pink : -10
Apefat : -18,5
Arkonix : 27,5
XxpipicacaloljeejsaasxX* : 38
Initial : 4
Gisele8 : 25,5
Ivabra : 24

1) Mejace : 21
2) XxpipicacaloljeejsaasxX* : 20
3) Neir'da : 19
4) Tchus : 18
5) Arkonix : 17
6) Dustfall / Gisele8 : 16
7) -
8 ) Mango : 14
9) Gravity / Ivabra : 13
10) -
11) Mushwoom : 11
12) Aaytowi2 / Leftfinger : 10
13) -
14) Tidus : 8
15) Aston : 7
16) Initial : 6
17) Apsa : 5
18) Frost : 4
19) Double J (Dark) : 3
20) Pink : 2
21) Apefat : 1